Archive for April, 2010

Magali Lopez- Freedom Writers Review

April 28, 2010

The Freedom Writers Diary

The freedom writers’ diary is based upon a collection of essays about life in the inner city written by the students of room 203 at Wilson High School in long Beach, California in 1994. This story is inspired by real teenagers after the LA riots, during the worst outbreak of interracial gang warfare and experiences of what each student had to face every day in the real world. This was Erin Gruwell’s first year as a teacher, whose very passion on starting that journey, but she is soon challenged by a group of  students that were not only separated by gangs but were also divided into separate sections such as; the Cambodians, the Ghetto, and the Tijuana’s. Mrs. Guwell’s freshmen   students’ didn’t only came from the streets but also from a Juvenile detention center. At the classroom the students were all separated by race that was the only way they keep from fighting each other. Others would refer to these students as dumb, violent who could never learn nor had plan to graduate high school. Erin, students never had someone that really care about them, she was set to change the world. To over come all of her struggles and fought until she became not only the best teacher but also someone to look up.

In the movie Hilary Swank plays Erin Gruwell herself, who shows up for her first day of school full of enthusiasm and not a little native. When she steps in the classroom the students totally ignore her and pay no attention to what she’s sating. During the school day Erin realized that it is going to take more motivation to encourage the students to focus on her lessons. When Erin got home that night she talk to her husband Scott played by Patrick Dempsey about the group of students she had and that she want it to make a difference in their lives as well as helping them like no one has ever done. The next day she goes back to the classroom with more energy to get students to participate by using things that are in some how relate to them. First, Erin’s efforts to connect with her students are to put her self in their place, using Tupac Shakur recording to explain “internal rhymes”. When the students reject her as a poseur who doesn’t understand what their life is really like. Erin begins to listen to them in away that no adult has ever done it; she begins to understand that for these kids, getting through the day alive is enough. Then one day one of Mrs. Gruwell’s students draws a racist picture of another classroom student and passes it around. By seeing the picture Erin feels indignant and lectures the class about prejudice. At that moment she notices that almost none of them have ever heard of the Holocaust. This gives her an idea of what if she could get them to read Anne Frank’s The Diary of a Young Girl and to write their own diaries. She struggles with Ms. Campbell to help her provide materials for he students by saying “you cannot make someone want and education”. Erin’s desire was to prove everyone wrong and that her students could change that this was just a matter of time.

Erin had to provide the materials her self and work at two part-time jobs besides being a teacher. By doing this Erin puts a strain in her personal life. Mrs. Gruwell’s husband starts to resent all the time and energy she is giving to her students. Erin’s father tries to change her mind about taking a challenge like this. Unfortunally she is set to change the world and is not stepping back.  Mrs. Gruwll’s husband feels left behind by his devoting wife. One night Miss. G and her husband Scott are talking when he says “I think what you are doing is noble and it is good, I am proud of you. I am. I just want to live my life and not feel bad about it and you are not their mother”. This is what is wrong today people believed in the ideals, but they don’t really want to pay for the price to pursue them.

A Latina teen named Eva played by April Lee Hernandez, who has witnessed a drive by shooting and the arrest of her father who was put in jail been innocent. Eva has taken a beating as part of her own initiation into the gang life and is also a third generation gang member. Although some of these events are depicted in chronological order, they feel like a flashback and unfold as tragedy. Mario played by Andre Bryant, is a young man with lost of potential but who also doesn’t believe on him self. Mario was raised with out a father and whose mother won’t even look at him because he looks exactly like his dad. In order to provide for his family he sells drugs. Marcus played by Jason Finn, is a tee who was kicked out of his house when his mother discover he was a gang member. Marcus later realizes that he deserve more for him self then what a gang would provide. Marcus scored Mrs. Miep Gies during her visit to Wilson high school. He tells her “Mrs. Miep I had never had a hero before, but now you are my hero”.  Suddenly she replies “I did what I had to do because it was the right thing to do. That is all. We are all ordinary people, but even an ordinary people secretary or housewife or a teenager can within their own small ways turn on a small light in a dark room… You are the heroes. You are heroes’ everyday”.

In conclusion, watching this video was a pleasure I had never heard of this great movie before. This film has met its objective and its full purpose, which to me is consider very inspire and motivate. The part that I enjoy the best was when Erin decides to play the line game and starts asking different questions. At this point everyone notice that they have a lot of things in command and that the only difference is their color and gangs group. This movie really made me cry and gives me hope that every one has the opportunity to change. We are humans and we are not perfect, because of this we make errors. I love when Erin gives them something they had never had from a teacher before “Respect”. For the first time, these teens experience a hope that maybe to show the world that their lives matter and they have something to say.

Magali Lopez- Professional Critic’s

April 28, 2010

Davis, Nick. “Freedom Writers Film Review”. Nick’s Flick Picks 8 Mar. 2007. 27                                            Apr.2010  <http:// www.nicksflickpicks.com/fwriters.htm1>.

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Freedom Writers is Hollywood’s version of a real-life tale of heroic teaching. Ironically, the film features almost zero teaching. Despite much pedagogical posturing, it doesn’t teach us much, either”.

I totally disagree with this person’s critique. The film could be clearer about how passionate and dedicated was Mrs. Erin towards her students.  That she actually teaches with the heart. It also shows that anyone can change. It just takes time but it will happen. This film teaches us that no matter what color or race each of us are we deserve the same respect.

Professional Critics review by Aasiya Bakali

April 28, 2010

Delapa, Thomas. “Freedom Writers”

 Boulder Weekly  15 Jan 2007.

 27 April 2010  http://www.boulderweekly.com/index.php

Gee whiz, if Swank taught in the typical American school, there’d be no child left behind. They’d all be polishing apples and asking for homework

I disagree with this review because Erin tries her level best to turn the racist classroom a place they feel like home.No other teacher in public schools would really look in the students personal problems.In the movie Erin went to each student’s dairies just to understand their problems.She also took 2 and 3 jobs just to buy the kids books.I would doubt that any public school teacher will ever do that!!!

Critic Disagreement By Francy Chavarriaga

April 28, 2010

“Her husband (Patrick Dempsey) is more complicated than your average movie spouse.”

Smith, Kyle. “Freedom Writers.”

New York Post 07 January 2007.

27 April 2010 <http://www.nypost.com/p/entertainment/movies/item_MIwK0x1LPQspu3ujZitA6J;jsessionid=FD65077A2BBD19DBE9B04038902E4ADB>.

I do not agree with this critic because they are taking about her husband as a complicated person. In my opinion he is not complicated, he is just asking about his rights as a husband.  I think when somebody get a compromise, he/she has to have enough time and energy for played all the  roles very well, like in this case as a teacher and wife.

Amber Hamilton, Movie Review Quote, Disagreement

April 28, 2010

Movie Review Quote, Disagreement

“The movie itself offers few real answers to the problems teachers face.”

I strongly disagree with Marrit Ingman’s opinion of the film.  The movie, Freedom Writers offers many “real” answers to the problems that many teachers may face.  Not only does this film provide answers, it also gives explanations.  Freedom Writers gives insight to a way of life that few people know about and obviously Ingman has little knowledge of the challenges that both teachers and students face in the inner-city.  For example, having lived in California for over five years I can honestly say that the movie accurately depicts the way of life for some people living in Southern California.  For instance, the gang activity in the movie; many students who live in the inner-city have some type of gang affiliation.  This gang affiliation is displayed in the movie when Ms. G creates a line in the center of the floor of her classroom and asked her students multiple questions about their gang affiliation.  Each time Ms. G asked different questions multiple students would step to the line, which in the movie meant that the question applied to them.  After the teacher finished asking her students these questions, she then gave them a different perspective on this way of life.  This proves that, the movie does provide “real” answers because the teacher was able to overcome the obstacle of discussing gang activity with her students in doing this in class activity. In my opinion, Freedom Writers is a movie that gives not only teachers the real answers, it also provides answers for students as well as the entire community, it explains why some students behave the way they do.

Ingman, Marrit.  “Freedom Writers.”  Metacritic  05 Jan. 2007.  27 Apr 2010             <http://www.austinchronicle.com/gyrobase/Calendar/Film?Film=oid%3A43    3135>.

Magali Lopez- Review quote

April 28, 2010

Turner, Matthew. “Freedom Writers Film Review.” Times of London 28 Jan. 2007.

            20 Apr.2010 <http://www.viewlondon.co.uk/films/freedom-writers-film-review-18478.htm1>.

“ An inspirational teacher movie that is moving, thought-provoking and succeeds in being genuinely inspiring”.

Critic Disagreement—Ana Quintanilla

April 28, 2010

Crust, Kevin. “Freedom Writers.” Los Angeles Times 5 Jan. 2007. 27 Apr. 2010 <http://www.calendarlive.com/printedition/calendar/cl-et-freedom5jan05,0,7458791.story>.

Dramatically, the movie never veers from its predictable course, but Swank’s performance renders the point moot.

In my opinion, the movie did veer off its predictable course. For example, when Eva is on the witness stand for the trial of her classmates shooting. She had stated that you had to protect your own kind, but in the end fesses up the truth as to who shot her classamates boyfriend.

David Moreno Movie’s critic

April 28, 2010

Davis, Nick. ” Freedom Writers.”

Nick’s Flick Picks  08 Mar. 2007.

27 Apr. 2010 <http://www.nicksflickpics.com/fwriters.html>.

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     “Freedom Writers is Hollywood’s version of a real-life tale of heroic teaching. Ironically, the film features almost zero teaching. Despite much pedagogical posturing, it doesn’t teach us much, either.”

      I disagree with this critic because  the film strongly teaches the resposabilities of a real teacher and the perfect way to educate the teenage students on how to treat each other as human beings no matter what race they are.

documentation of fellow student movie review by Aasiya Bakali

April 28, 2010

Nguyen, Peter. “Freedom Writers Review.”  Online posting

22 April 2010.English 1302-8502: Spring 2010

27 April 2010 http://English13028502.wordpress.com.

Erin finds other ways of penetrating the “hard-core” attitude that her students placed up as a defense mechanism, due to their will for survival. With much persistence, she slowly is able to break through to her students. As she strengthens her bond with her students, she gradually loses the relationship with her husband, Scott Casey (Patrick Dempsey). Inspired by the “Free Riders” movement, the students began a project to place their individual diaries in a book and called themselves “The Freedom Writers”.

Magali Lopez – student movie review

April 28, 2010

Richardson, Anthony. “Freedom Witers Review.” Online posting. 16 April 2010. English 1302-8504: spring 2010. 22 April 2010 http://English 13028502.wordpress.com.

“Even ordinary people can turn on a small light in a dark room.”


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